psycosquirrel15
07-07-2014, 10:17 AM
Looking for some feedback on my diy chapter fluff please feel free to criticize i want good and bad
THE DRAGON FORGED
The exact time in which The Dragon Forged were founded is unknown from now unknown gene stock all that is really known about their origin is that they were founded and stationed in the Rhaegal system on the planet Rhaegal V in order to counter a treat that was predicted to arise there.
Sworn to destroy all treats to there home system The Dragon Forged have fought in many campaigns on many worlds including Armageddon and it was here that they fought along side The Salamanders with whom they would later form a friendship with. Even going as far as to adopt some of there tactics.
The Dragon Forged's home world Rhaegal V is a planet covered mostly in forest and mountains with towns and city's of a medieval nature scattered around its three continents. The hard life the locals live has produced many strong and hardy recruits for The Dragon Forged who Rule Rhaegal V from their fortress high in the northern mountains of the planets central continent. It is here that the current chapter master Balerion Wrex governs the local populace and The Dragon Forged maintain the aerial fleets for which they are famed. In the deepest caverns below the fortress lays the Dragon Forge were legend says the chapters Techmarines have enslaved many of the planets mighty wryms and use their fire to forge weapons and wargear of a quality rivalling even The Salamanders or The Blood Angels. Such weapons include The Dragon Breath Flamer which recruits must survive a blast form in order to become "Dragon Forged" resulting in many of The Dragon Forged having horrible scars and burns which they view as a badge of honour.
Not keen on the Codex Astarte The Dragon Forged prefer to do there own thing and develop their own tactics including adopting and modifying the tactic of The Salamanders whom they recently fought along side and have developed a bond with during the 3rd war of Armageddon.
Since then The Dragon Forged have been fighting the greenskins wherever they emerge. It was during one these battles that Brother Sergeant Falcor stood as an example of what it means to be Dragon Forged. During the Battle of Glaedr III He and his squad aided by two squads of Salamanders held the narrow streets of a local city long enough for the civilians to be evacuated. When it seem the orks would overrun there position Falcon lead his squad in a counter charge which along with the salamander cover fire nearly broke the orks resolve. It was the arrival of six mega armoured nobz that spelled Falcors doom although he and the remainder of his squad fought bravely killing three of the nobz they were eventual cut down. The remaining nobz were finished off by the Salamanders support fire but by this time Falcor was little more then a bloody mess. So impressed were the Salamanders by Falcors sacrifice that he was taken to Nocturne and in cased in a rare contmptor dreadnought and returned to The Dragon Forged where serves as an example for all Dragon Forged.
These days The Dragon Forged maintain vigil of the Rhaegal system awaiting the treat that they were founded to fight what ever that may be. They are also commonly seen fighting along side The Salamanders.
THE DRAGON FORGED
The exact time in which The Dragon Forged were founded is unknown from now unknown gene stock all that is really known about their origin is that they were founded and stationed in the Rhaegal system on the planet Rhaegal V in order to counter a treat that was predicted to arise there.
Sworn to destroy all treats to there home system The Dragon Forged have fought in many campaigns on many worlds including Armageddon and it was here that they fought along side The Salamanders with whom they would later form a friendship with. Even going as far as to adopt some of there tactics.
The Dragon Forged's home world Rhaegal V is a planet covered mostly in forest and mountains with towns and city's of a medieval nature scattered around its three continents. The hard life the locals live has produced many strong and hardy recruits for The Dragon Forged who Rule Rhaegal V from their fortress high in the northern mountains of the planets central continent. It is here that the current chapter master Balerion Wrex governs the local populace and The Dragon Forged maintain the aerial fleets for which they are famed. In the deepest caverns below the fortress lays the Dragon Forge were legend says the chapters Techmarines have enslaved many of the planets mighty wryms and use their fire to forge weapons and wargear of a quality rivalling even The Salamanders or The Blood Angels. Such weapons include The Dragon Breath Flamer which recruits must survive a blast form in order to become "Dragon Forged" resulting in many of The Dragon Forged having horrible scars and burns which they view as a badge of honour.
Not keen on the Codex Astarte The Dragon Forged prefer to do there own thing and develop their own tactics including adopting and modifying the tactic of The Salamanders whom they recently fought along side and have developed a bond with during the 3rd war of Armageddon.
Since then The Dragon Forged have been fighting the greenskins wherever they emerge. It was during one these battles that Brother Sergeant Falcor stood as an example of what it means to be Dragon Forged. During the Battle of Glaedr III He and his squad aided by two squads of Salamanders held the narrow streets of a local city long enough for the civilians to be evacuated. When it seem the orks would overrun there position Falcon lead his squad in a counter charge which along with the salamander cover fire nearly broke the orks resolve. It was the arrival of six mega armoured nobz that spelled Falcors doom although he and the remainder of his squad fought bravely killing three of the nobz they were eventual cut down. The remaining nobz were finished off by the Salamanders support fire but by this time Falcor was little more then a bloody mess. So impressed were the Salamanders by Falcors sacrifice that he was taken to Nocturne and in cased in a rare contmptor dreadnought and returned to The Dragon Forged where serves as an example for all Dragon Forged.
These days The Dragon Forged maintain vigil of the Rhaegal system awaiting the treat that they were founded to fight what ever that may be. They are also commonly seen fighting along side The Salamanders.