need alot of feedback

[heretic marine]

hello i need a whole lot of feedback to this

http://www.lounge.belloflostsouls.net/showthread.php?t=17068

please help we have done play testing and we still are but we need more minds looking at this

thanks in advance

[Grailkeeper]

One small thing, I'm not sure what the fiuff is exactly, but in real life judges would be referred to as a "Lord Justice" rather than "Lord Judge", Judge is fine for the lower ranked judges. I'm from a legal backround so that kind of niggles.

The fluff is good (I like the Dreddful Judge) but could use a little bit of punctuation, to make it easier to read.

[heretic marine]

OK thanks i will get working on those. why it says adeptus arbites codex [fluff] is because i made 2 one with the fluff and one with just the rules

[heretic marine]

have the new update with punctuation. the link has been changed in the other thread. i will post the one with the basic rules if people want it. there may be a few things that look odd if you would point them out that would be great