raven guard first list

[B-rock]

Shadow Captain Kayvaan Strike=195
Captain bike SS TH artilicer armour =190
Assault squadx10 flamer SS PF =230
Assault Squadx10 flamer SS PF =230
Assault Squadx10 flamer SS PF =230
Bike squadx7 2x meltagun attack bike(multi-melta) PF =260
Bike squadx7 2x meltagun attack bike(multi-melta) PF =260
Predator las las(sponsons) extra armour =180
Predator las las(sponsons) extra armour =180

the list is spam but the bikes and the assault squads pack a punch and they have fleet which is awesome with movement 12". if i get lucky i can make combat turn one if i go top of turn and i can for sure get it if i go bottom of turn. the predators and the bikes are geared for tank hunting for mech.

this is my first list with strike plz comment

[BrokenWing]

What I find concerning is that you will need to be exceptionally careful with your assault marines, hopping from terrain piece to terrain piece, if you want them to get anywhere. You have no real mobile cover of your own, especially if you plan on throwing your bikes forward.